作文赏析:生活品质的提高是否带来环境污染

来源:今日头条发布时间:2017-07-28

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  As the society is advancing by leaps and bounds, technological achievement and economic prosperity are frequently attended by the fact that the ecosystem of the earth is getting from bad to worse under this circumstance, an absolute consensus can hardly be reached whether the improvement of life quality is the crime(chief) culprit of the contaminant. For my part, I side with the opponents to a larger extent.

  It has to be admitted that more and more developed countries develop their economy at the expense of the environment. In order to produce wealth, countries attach great importance to the excessive construction of the first industry, which does harm to the environment such as air pollution, soil erosion and so on. Based on these, it seems that better life brings out the pollution. However, it makes no sense to regard economic prosperity as better life.

  Much heavier weight should be attached to the fact that better life need (needs) to be eco-friendly, which (should be) based on a rational balance between environment and human activities. Nowadays, people struggle for the standardized life under the fast-paced atmosphere. It is a pity that we turn blind eyes to more valuable things which are dying out like the fresh air and shining stars. It is the time to limit the pace of development, which only concerns (about) economy. The high quality of life is intimately bound up with friendly environment. Technology should be based on the harmony between people and nature.(这两句话和上面的重复) It is people’s wrong concept towards life that really damage(单数)our common home. The protection of (the)environment can never be the barrier of the happy life.

  based on the analysis mentioned above, the protection of (the) environment and the quality of life do not fall into a conflict, both of which should go hand in hand with each other.(这句话后面最好再加点具体的内容,毕竟这是套句)

  比如可以这样:The currently environmental damage is the consequence of our misguided conception that material wealth is equal to a better life. Environmental protection will not stand in the way of our pursuit of a really better life.

  希望以上内容能对各位有所帮助噢!

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